Xaos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Character Tutorial]

nice

I think this will help a lot of people,
Nice job =)

[Preview ........]

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Sorry, I really didnt understand that, and why on earth did you make that thing loop??
I dont understand how a labtop can suddenly unlock a door from a building that is like 50ft away, you can just go to the building and break the door open...
Im sorry for that but I couldn't understand that thing at all,
in the future, put a stop command the the last frame and mabey have a better introduction.

Fim responds:

hmm....I shall re-think the plot/ lack of plot. But thanks anyway for the constructive critism - it really helps!

[Shut Up]

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Sorry, that just didnt seem that funny too me, however I'll give u points for making a claymation, in the future maybey make it longer and make a story out of it or something...

[Upon A Hill Stood A Druid]

Not bad..

This was very good for a first flash, however I have a few suggestions for you.
First of all, you could edit the preloader so it goes with your movie.
Second of all, You should try to add accesories to the druid so people would acuallly know that it is a druid. for example you could add armors, helmet, weapons things like that.
You also might want to think about the music, the music just got very annoying for some reason.
I wish you good luck on your next flash creations.

[Fuckin n00bs (teaser)]

It was ok, however...

There are about 5,000 other movies out there with the idea that your flash has, stick figures dying...
Also, I don't really like those 20 second animations, I think newgrounds should have a seperate section for short animations like this.
Anyway, I thought it was too bad. The loading screen sort of cliche, but that doesnt really matter.
Anyway, in the future I suggest you make longer movies with a creative plot behind it.
I wish you good luck in the future.

[Pink?!?]

Wow....

I'm sorry but...how long was this flash????
Please....people don't go to newgrounds to go and watch watch a 10 second flash that made no sense at all.You seriously must of put no fucking effort into this....I mean the people were good and so was the backround but....that doesnt prove that your a good flash artist..It only proves that you could only make a 10 second long peice of shit with ok graphics.....and please next time at least EDIT the preloader.......never make a flash again..please..

DELETED-1 responds:

"and please next time at least EDIT the preloader"-"never make a flash again..please.."- could you explain to me how I should edit the preloader but not make a flash a the same time, please?

[The NewGrounds Machine]

Nice

Graphics : Awesome graphics and animation, very smooth and detailed
Sound : I enjoyed the music and it fit nicely except sound effects would of made it even better.
Style : Awesome and original
Humor : That was pretty funny..but more on the cool side than funny

[..]

Dude...learn to draw

Your characters look fucked up and retarded..........But AWESOME MOVIE!!!!

bobby8000 responds:

LOL i thought they looked good, Ah well ur the reviewer, so ur right :) Thanks for the review il touch the characters up a bit next time

[Killer Ep.1]

Awesome!!!!

That move had nice effects great job! The only problem was the it ould of been longer...I can't wait fo episode 2!

[Platforms¹³]

Awesome!

Except it would of been cooler if it was a little longer