nice
I think this will help a lot of people,
Nice job =)
nice
I think this will help a lot of people,
Nice job =)
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Sorry, I really didnt understand that, and why on earth did you make that thing loop??
I dont understand how a labtop can suddenly unlock a door from a building that is like 50ft away, you can just go to the building and break the door open...
Im sorry for that but I couldn't understand that thing at all,
in the future, put a stop command the the last frame and mabey have a better introduction.
hmm....I shall re-think the plot/ lack of plot. But thanks anyway for the constructive critism - it really helps!
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Sorry, that just didnt seem that funny too me, however I'll give u points for making a claymation, in the future maybey make it longer and make a story out of it or something...
Not bad..
This was very good for a first flash, however I have a few suggestions for you.
First of all, you could edit the preloader so it goes with your movie.
Second of all, You should try to add accesories to the druid so people would acuallly know that it is a druid. for example you could add armors, helmet, weapons things like that.
You also might want to think about the music, the music just got very annoying for some reason.
I wish you good luck on your next flash creations.
It was ok, however...
There are about 5,000 other movies out there with the idea that your flash has, stick figures dying...
Also, I don't really like those 20 second animations, I think newgrounds should have a seperate section for short animations like this.
Anyway, I thought it was too bad. The loading screen sort of cliche, but that doesnt really matter.
Anyway, in the future I suggest you make longer movies with a creative plot behind it.
I wish you good luck in the future.
Nice
Graphics : Awesome graphics and animation, very smooth and detailed
Sound : I enjoyed the music and it fit nicely except sound effects would of made it even better.
Style : Awesome and original
Humor : That was pretty funny..but more on the cool side than funny
Awesome!!!!
That move had nice effects great job! The only problem was the it ould of been longer...I can't wait fo episode 2!
Awesome!
Except it would of been cooler if it was a little longer
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